Monday, September 25, 2023

Episode #190: When A Trilogy Becomes A Series, The Brain Cries, "What?!"

Picture was taken in early September during my morning walk through Cedar Mountain.

Presently, I'm about half to two-thirds of the way through volume the 3rd of my Hot Mess trilogy, when a troubling/intriguing question began rearing its fugly head: should I extend this trilogy by another volume?

The reason why this question is starting to muscle its way to the forefront is simple: 1} the chapters are becoming a tad longer due to the complexity of the various plot-lines; 2} I haven't even reached the climax of the third ending of the plot; which means that 4} haven't even thought about the actual ending of the story.

However, the engine that is really driving the decision to extend to a 4th and final volume is how the first two ended, with the third following close behind. To whit:

Book the 1st: the pivotal climax is the successful attack to kidnap the male MC;
Book the 2nd: the chase by the male MC's family to recapture him, with the climax being the actual battle to unsuccessfully rescue him;
Book the 3rd: the chase by both parties to retrieve the male MC, which climaxes with one party being successful and the other not;

There is no real way to squeeze two events, which are to retrieve the male MC at the halfway point to the kingdom AND the finale, which is another attempt at rescuing the male MC, with as yet undetermined outcome, without making that 3rd book twice the size of the first two (the first two will have roughly 25-28 chapters each).

Thus the need for Book the 4th, in that if the first two books ended with two semi-cliffhangers and the third shaping up to have another semi-cliffhanger, a 4th is needed to conclude everything. 

Which is why the brain is crying tears of pain, with the pain being that the brain churned out 610 pages of text, which translates to 276,563 words spread out over 63 chapters. But try as the mighty brain wanted to, they couldn't avoid the hard realization that a fourth volume would be needed, which in turn would probably push the word count to 450k +/- and a page count of 825 +/-. By the way, I'm going to use this prediction as my overall goal.

In all honesty, I never really intended to write a fourth volume. Shoot, I never intended to write more than one book to begin with for this story. I figured that it would be the proverbial, wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am, type of novel clocking in with a 100k+ word count and 200+ pages. But the more that I really got into fleshing out the entire story and characters, the more I realized that one volume simply wasn't going to cut it.

So it got to be a viscous circle of the more I fleshed it out, the longer and more complex it became, which in turn upped the ante from one to two to three and now to four volumes once everything was said and done. I'm not disappointed by any stretch of the imagination, but I never really did think I had it in me to churn out so many words for what's turning out to be an epic low-fantasy story. Which I'm very proud of.

Looking back on the completion dates of the chapters written, I have seen that I have spent well over fifteen months working on this story (June 2022) and I'm shooting for a January 2024 completion date. Kind of a wild ride for a story that had to be rescued from a flooded basement, dried out and rewritten from the very beginning. And to those who are curious, this story was originally 84+ pages in length when I had given up on it, and for comparison, the point where I had originally given up on it is now located roughly 150+ pages deep into volume one.

Have a fantastic Monday and remember, it's only the second day of the week and Taco Tuesday with Hump Day Wednesday is just around the corner before the home stretch of the weekend.


{c} 2023 by G.B. Miller. All Rights Reserved

Monday, September 18, 2023

Episode #189: Once Again, The Hardest Part Of The Story Is Done

A blast from my very distant work past has come back to make an appearance. Have no idea where he is now, maybe soaking up the rays on a sunny beach somewhere on the East coast.

As the above title states, this post is something of a repeat, in that we're posting a revamped version of the blurb for my Average American Novella. Apparently, after getting some sobering advice in my writer's group, which included the realization on my part that my blurb was suggesting something completely different, we needed to do a complete overhaul.

So, with a large chunk of help from a fellow writer friend (who will get an acknowledgment credit when all is said and done), I was able to create a tag line, a short blurb, and a longer blurb for my Average American Novella. The title options are still the same: The Hidden Truth and The Lie Reveals The Truth.

Up first, the tag followed by the short blurb and finally, the long blurb:

Tag line

Revenge is a brutal game, but Dmitri is playing for keeps.

Short Blurb

Soul collecting is both a dangerous and lucrative business, and no one knows better than the netherworld’s premier soul collector, Dmitri. Creating enemies is part of the job, but when a simple favor for a friend turns out to be a set-up, Dmitri finds himself in the cross-hairs of a contract hit. Tangled in a web of sec, lies and violence, the collector must do whatever it takes to survive.

Survival is a brutal game, but Dmitri is playing for his life in this fast paced dark fantasy.

Long Blurb

Against his better judgment, the Sulfur Underground’s premier soul collector Dmitri, agrees to do a small favor for a friend. At least, it was supposed to be small: deliver a package and walk away. Instead, he finds himself on the wrong end of a contract hit.

When Kaitlyn fast talks her way into tagging along, Dmitri has no idea she’s in on the contract and the pair soon become more than accomplices. A lot more. But when Kaitlyn has a change of heart and confesses both her participation as well as her love, Dmitri doesn’t know who or what to trust.

With the odds becoming increasingly stacked against him, Dmitri must trust his heart and instincts if he wants to survive and keep reaping what the world continues to sow.

Let me know what you think in the comments. These blurbs fit better with the basic fantasy premise, while the previous blurb gave off a vibe of being a thriller novella.

{c} 2023 by G.B. Miller. All Rights Reserved

Monday, September 11, 2023

Episode #188: A Unique Story Always Enriches The Culture {4}

The two gloves are now conducting a symphony performed by the various trees and non-woodland creatures. Who am I kidding, they're just waiting for the right moment to tap an innocent bystander on the shoulder and say, "Wassup?!"

The last post of our series involves the very real concept of "world building". Now any writer worth their iodized salt does world building for their particular story. Not in the traditional sense of the concept, where one builds an incredibly rich and detailed world for their fantasy/paranormal story; but more in the non-traditional sense, where one builds a believable world for their story but doesn't go completely off the rails.

A decent example of this would be the world that I am creating piecemeal for my trilogy. It's not overly detailed with a backstory that permeates/affects the entire story (think any good fantasy series that you've read in the past decade or so), but detailed enough to get the job done and keep the reader engaged.

So I'm going to try, with this final post of the series, to describe what I've created for both sides of this trilogy. For the sake of simplicity, the first side that will be touched up will be called "Earth, with the other side being called "The Pod Planet". Also for simplicity's sake, I will state that I did perform some needed research for both sides of this trilogy, because a story is incredibly dull without a modicum of research added to the mix.
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1} Earth: I would be telling an untruth if I'd stated that creating this version of Earth was easy peasy lemon squeezy. It was not, by any stretch of anyone's imagination. Let's start off by going into a very short summary of how I used the Aztec empire as a starting point for two of my MC's: Jhon and Adeola. 

Now one of the things that I enjoy creating in my stories, are non-traditional business entities. All of these non-traditional business entities feature a particular noun that normally wouldn't be used that way. In this particular instance, the Aztecs were turned into a very savvy and quite the large business entity, albeit extremely cruel and unforgivably ruthless. In essence, I gave them a very lucrative side hustle involving all aspects of gambling, and simply worked in a few of the more unsavory parts of their culture.

Like human sacrifices as the ultimate payment for basically an impossible to pay gambling debt (you know, the kind of debt where you're worth more dead than alive). Complete with the requisite paperwork for life insurance policies etc, so that the families of the degenerate gambler will no longer be subjected to harassment by debt collectors. Maybe.

I did not pursue the same philosophy with Jhon's wife, Myla. Even though she was originally an unwilling resident of the Pod Planet, she did reside on Earth for a number of horrifying years. So by the time we cross paths with the Ventura's, they are working for a small profitable company called Dandelion Inc (the original title of this story was called "Dandelion Tears), with Jhon being the public face of the company, while Myla was working as a relatively efficient debt collector. 

The reasoning behind the two Incan ladies, Ilka & Bella, being called "ladies-in-waiting" and initially acting servile but gaining confidence as the story progresses, calling Myla their Queen, is due to the secret mission they're on: reuniting Myla with her sister the Pod Queen. Now regarding the Incan culture et al, I didn't delve too much into it, beyond inferring that the civilization was decimated by wars and the like. I kept the references to that culture to the basics, like language, location and some mythology. Also, these two are considered to be decidedly non-human entities, with Bella becoming a spirit/symbiont that sometimes can be seen by others.

Now given the fact that overall, we're playing very fast and extremely loose with the concept of time, it should come to no one's surprise that horses are being used for basic transportation. And it should come to no one's surprise that the horses come from a distant past measured by decades/centuries, with references to previous centuries such as the 18th and 20th.

Before I delve into the world of the Pod Planet, I would like to mention that virtually all of the main players on both sides possess telepathy with various degrees of skill levels. Even the three humans involved (since everyone else is distinctly a non-human of some repute) have some ability to use telepathy. And because this is a fantasy, everyone has a special skill set that is uniquely tied to them.

2} The Pod Planet: The Pod Planet was a little easier to create, since I had only the barest of outlines from the original story to work with. By "barest", I mean from the original story I had maybe one page in total to create this world from. So with that being said, let's put this subject to the side for a moment, in order to focus on the one main character that is the originator for the rest of the players who call the Pod Planet home.

The Pod Queen. As mentioned previously, the Pod Planet has a monarchy that is strictly matriarchal in its ruling structure. Men exclusively control the power behind the throne, via an entity called The Royal Entourage, as well as fulfilling all roles connected to the palace and government (think of Parliament after Oliver Cromwell). These two seemingly irreconcilable power structures are the driving force behind the machinations of the Pod Queen. A reverse coup d'etat if you will, with the monarchy looking to neuter its version of Parliament.

The Pod Planet itself, while outwardly looking like the typical late Renaissance empire, is anything but that. Instead, it's a blended empire of ancient and modern technology, and fantasy/paranormal For example, animal transportation is used, yet, they have scientists from all fields. Communication is either oral, written, telepathy, or in some cases, modern video, between human and non-human. And just like the majority of the main players in the story, the Pod Queen has a hair spirit, otherwise known as a symbiont.

The Pod Planet is also home to a large population of non-natives, both voluntary and involuntary. For example, two humans who were promoted to voluntary citizens of the Pod Planet, were originally from Earth, as former members of the military. Nyx, who is very much a major component of the story, was also originally an outlier of the non-voluntary type (as mentioned in a previous post), but now is a voluntary outlier of a different sort.

So as the story progresses and with more of the action being centered on the Pod Planet, the breadth and scope of exactly what the Pod Planet is will surely increase. So far, we have confined our descriptions to what the palace and its inhabitants are; the main palace chambers and antechambers; the Queen's bedchambers; and a fraction of the landscape.

I certainly hope that you enjoyed my short series about the inner workings of my Hot Mess trilogy. It definitely was an enlightening journey for me, as I usually have problems in trying to describe most aspects of a given story that I'm either currently writing or have written. Sometime expressing one's self via the written word can be far more rewarding than simply trying to talk it up.

{c} 2023 by G.B. Miller. All Rights Reserved

Monday, September 4, 2023

Episode #187: A Unique Culture Always Enriches The Story {3}

I found the missing glove the other day, so the right is saying to the left, "you say goodbye, and I say hello."

In today's post we'll be talking about the various traits/personalities that I have graced my characters with. While I will be primarily talking about the MCs, I will also be touching upon a few of the SCs as well.

Even though all of my characters have traits/personalities that make them truly unique, for all but three of my female characters, both MC and SC, I have christened them with hair spirits. I have always been fascinated with the concept of symbionts, so I decided to see just how far I could go with it. I have already used the hair spirit trope, with some degree of success, in two of my published novels, The Inner Sibling and The Friendship Has Begun (which I really need to get restarted on again), but this will be the first time that I've really fleshed them out as unique sentient beings in their own right. 

Of the remaining three female MC's, Bella and Ilka, do not have hair spirits. They do have other basic traits, of which I will elaborate on later in this post. The third, Nyx, while she does not have a hair spirit per se, she does borrow her mother's from time to time, and she does play host to a pair of symbiont tattoos, which I will also elaborate on later in this post.

With the very small background dump out of the way, let us now explore the remaining cast of characters. Oh, one other thing that I should note: telepathy is a (mostly) natural life skill for all.

1} Jhon: Jhon is basically a Caucasian guy with no special skills beyond being an immortal, a high threshold for pain, a tolerance of a liquid edible called blood, and an extremely vivid storyteller, among other traits. Jhon became who he was due to a very extensive history, both public and private, with the Aztecs.

2} Myla: was an escapee from the Pod Planet, who originally was sent to the Pod as a captured slave (?). She was genetically modified to be a hybrid with vampire tendencies. I haven't really decided what her ethnicity should be, beyond being a few lighter shades of what her sister is (who is currently unknown to her). Her hair spirit is similar to her, personality-wise, in that she takes no prisoners, is stealthy and does not tolerate any kind of nonsense from her at all. Is also genetically different as per a previous post.

3} Ilka and Bella: both are members of the Incan empire. Petite in stature, but ginormous in personality, supremely confident in themselves and in each other, telepathic, warlike (Bella) and studious (Ilka). Are currently playing the role of ladies-in-waiting to Myla, who they consider to be their queen. Also, they do not have hair spirits, and one is genetically predisposed as per a previous post.

4} Adeola: Jhon's ex-wife, warrior-like, and still works for the Aztecs. Nationality is unknown due to her skin color being aqua-marine, does not have a hair spirit, highly intelligent and telepathic, and is/was mentally/emotionally/spiritually/physically connected to her ex. Also is one of three mentioned in a previous post as being genetically different.

5} Macha: The aforementioned sister of Myla, who is officially known as the Pod Queen. She is what most people would call an "identical twin", right down to the toned physique and fiery red hair. Ethnicity is unclear, but she also has a hair spirit, who does not have a filter and is loyal to a fault, sometimes to her own detriment.

6} Nyx: Her mother was mentioned previously as being Scandinavian, as she was the beginning of the genealogical line, but she is the proverbial end. Ethnicity could be either from Central or South America. Does not have a hair spirit, but uses her mother's from time to time. Was genetically modified to be both a hunter and a breeder prior to her assimilation to the Pod Planet. Does have a pair of symbiont tattoos to who she plays host to. Is telepathic and is discovering new powers from time to time (such as the ability to turn a mere human immortal, with certain caveats).

7} Thanatos: Nyx's foster son who grew up on the Pod Planet as an orphan. Does have basic telepathic powers, but has a skill set second to none, who has traveled to other planetary worlds to acquire more knowledge.

8} Roberto (Black) & Melissa (White/Hispanic mix): true blue North Americans (probably US) who are current members of the military who were captured by Nyx and company while out on a camping trip. After a horrific week spent as "unpersons", they were offered the opportunity to become immortal by Nyx, which they took. While the both of them are learning how their new bodies work, Melissa managed to acquire a hair spirit, who is very much a newbie.

9} Lady Nordic: As mentioned previously, she is the prototypical Scandinavian-Nordic person (blonde with blue eyes, pale skin and healthy physique). Beyond that though, she is someone completely unique. While she doesn't have a hair spirit in the traditional sense, she does have a wooden cedar vine mirror that helps out from time to time. Also has telepathic skills second to none, with both human and non-human entities, and quite a bit of medical skills.

10} And finally, the last major player in the story is everyone's favorite canine from Sulfur City: Cerberus. I actually did a bit of Wikipedia research on the three headed dog, because in the original version of the story, at one key scene in the second novel, I had other dogs involved. So naturally, down a rabbit hole I did explore. But anyways, I decided to tweak the dogs to make them quite knowledgeable and quite indestructible. Among other things, they can understand virtually any type of verbal/non verbal language from any human/non-human, and I gave them the ability to act like normal dogs.

11} Other assorted secondary characters. I do want to note that the hair spirits are really symbiotic in nature, which is why, I believe, they can get away with saying certain things and doing certain things more often than others. Having said that, I would like to touch upon the assorted secondary characters that are strewn about the story.

There are four horses that are named: Blanco, Akhal, Xenia and Carlos, all of which have telepathic powers. While Xenia is a bit of a flake, Carlos carries a bottomless saddlebag that contains whatever you made need at a given moment, while the other two have distinctive personalities that come off like Burt (serious) and Ernie (laid back). There are three humanoids who are mute, thus talk in generic sign language, and rudimentary telepathy; a slave/lover for one of the main characters, and the aforementioned tattoos for that same main character.

Overall, I do enjoy creating characters that are very much out of the norm in stories these days. What I do is cultural appreciation, as I'm not trying to talk about a particular character's country origin and what they've gone through on a personal level, only a basic background that required an above average amount of research (like I did with the Incas and the Aztecs). In fact, for just about all of my characters, I did an above average amount of research for what was needed. When I do write about something, regardless of whatever kind of noun it happens to be, I always do the research required so that I don't come off like an idiot.

Doing the required research for the mini-world building that was needed for this trilogy will be the final topic of choice for this series. Until next time, have a safe and sane start to your week.


{c} 2023 by G.B. Miller. All Rights Reserved